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Tears In Her Eye's

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{Tears In Her Eye's} 

 

The tears in eye troubled sad eyes that flowed down her trouble worrisome cheeks as he laid beside her fast asleep as she slowly laid her head down on the wet pillows that was underneath her head without him even hearing her cry so as she cried and wepted for him because even though he laid beside of her she felt like she was alone in their bed and like what did I do something so wrong while soaking her pillows wetter and wetter from her uncontrollable tears as she hugged her pillow so tight as she cried her self to sleep that long saddest night of her life as he was still fast asleep without hearing a peep 

 

 

 

 

©One_Pissed_Off_American_Ghost_Writer/Tina Glover 11/30/2017 all rights reserved 

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Tina Glover

Fri 1st Dec 2017 03:16

Thank you Beno,


Let me say I'm sorry for the late reply cuz I'm new to this site and I'm still working everything out and it's taking me time to get back to some of the comments because of me being new here but now to answer your question://


Yes this is a very sad emotional over flooded with words of hurt anguish, emotions, sadness, pain from her love which makes her feel so sad like she isn't wanted or needed or even loved so at night sometimes she cries without him waking up and the reason why he could sleep so easily is because he basically puts ear plugs in his ears and drowns the sounds of her crying completely out and he could care less whether or not his girl is so upset as she lays there beside of him in their bed crying at night because he makes her feel this way and this is a touching deep messed up piece that I've written with so much emotion to it and I hope I answered your question if not let me know and I will do my best to answer it the best way I can and I can I am so sorry for the late reply cuz I honestly didn't see it until now and thank you for reading my work and leaving me nice comments on them I do appreciate that ?


Sincerely Tina,

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Thu 30th Nov 2017 08:14

Very Sad Tina. The flood of words without and full stops adds to the flood of emotion. The girl blames herself ( a familiar story). What has he done, and why can he sleep so easily (even if he hasn't done anything)? When his girl is so upset.
Lovely piece of of work.
Thanks. Beno.

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