BISCUIT FACTORY
BISCUIT FACTORY
Here one learns a new vocabulary
tinwash, tray off, mobcap,
swiping in and stacking down.
Some of us arrived for a month
one spring and stayed forever
like jaded nomads finding pasture,
needs met, horizons ending here.
In ghost-infested rooms
the newcomer gets lost, disorientated
by the sprawling tangle and pulse
of peculiar machinery
whose failings have produced
a grim, resilient folklore
and we endure its unexpected power
to mess with natural instincts
until we finally grow indifferent
while paying lip service
to the gods of health and safety.
Published in Algebra of Owls, September 2017
john short
Thu 7th Dec 2017 06:32
Cheers Suki, David and Ray.
Thanks for your comments and feedback. It's always useful to see how people react to poems. This one took a while to get right, since its first incarnation which was rejected by a couple of magazines. I must say though, I was pleased I could manage a poem out of such a mundane situation.