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Memories of a warmer solstice

Stalking ghosts with horns and hooves

resolve into elderly elms and oaks.

A hundred hungry barking squirrels argue

with the dawn’s reluctant acorns

while damp mist sits cold and earthy

in my chilly nostrils.

I stretch wearily and release my stiff back

finally and gladly from the yew’s hard caress.

I can taste hot pancakes,

sharp bright blueberries

and thick sticky syrup,

all in the kitchen

an hour’s steady pace away,

and with purpose and peace,

walk into the day.

 

 

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David Taylor-Jones

Fri 15th Dec 2017 14:24

Hi Colin, thanks for your feedback, it's good to hear from you again. I can remember the great Dutch Elm Disease cull as well, our local park suffered heavily, sad days.

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Fri 15th Dec 2017 07:47

lovely poem David, so very you if I may say so. I've been trying to write a poem about an elm tree and realised reading yours that I probably wouldn't recognise one if it fell over in front of me. All the elms were cut down where I grew up in Sussex after the Dutch disease of the 70's. They are still missed on certain roads. Cheers, Col.
PS: I knew some people once called 'Elmer' but they were not related to the trees as far as I knew.

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David Taylor-Jones

Thu 14th Dec 2017 22:45

Thanks Ray, much appreciated

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raypool

Thu 14th Dec 2017 22:17

A nicely rounded and spicy winter's tale David. Rich in flavour and fruity with choice words. Enjoyable stuff!

Ray

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David Taylor-Jones

Thu 14th Dec 2017 19:11

Thanks Hannah, I needed some nature and life today ?

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Thu 14th Dec 2017 19:08

A poem filled with nature and life.
Really loved this.

Hannah

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David Taylor-Jones

Thu 14th Dec 2017 18:19

Thanks Beno, thanks Jon. I'm glad this one reached you, I just needed to be with the woods for a while on this chilly day with the heating on!

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Jon

Thu 14th Dec 2017 17:14

Hi David
Brilliant poem. Almost felt as if I was there. Nice one mate.
Jon

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Thu 14th Dec 2017 17:06

This poem is just ace.
I am very familiar with the setting and the feelings that go with it. Its all captured here perfectly.
The squirrels jarred me out of the poems general chilled out feel, like they would in reality. I assume this was intentional. I'm not sure if id rather they be quite! lol.
Thanks David.

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