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Sticks and Stones

 

The printed voice of my enemy

tells a tale of false woes and wails,

of splintered lives-

stolen and shattered.

 

Poisoned, smudged, inky pages-

a narrative neither uniform or blessed with truth,

engraved with prattle and malice.

This paper bound monologue,

filled with malevolence.

 

Yet I am learning to guard and shield,

to gather and fold my injuries,

put them somewhere safe-

away from urgent claim and demand.

 

My reflex for mangled rage

may in time become vague-

fading to shadows in the sunlight

and all this tuneless discord,

rattling in my head,

will even out to a single note.....

sounding the retreat.

 

 

 

 

from the spitting lower world

◄ Searching for Chains

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 19th Dec 2009 22:58

Hi Sian, how ya doin? enjoyed this gritty determined number best wishes Jeff X

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Andy N

Wed 18th Nov 2009 08:20

i agree with franine - love the last stanza in particular but good piece all round

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 17th Nov 2009 22:28

"Engraved with prattle and malice" and "to gather and fold my injuries" are lovely words. The angst is tangible and well balanced although alarming. I'm really pleased to see you back on here. Your output is worse even than mine though, more more please.

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Francine

Tue 17th Nov 2009 22:12

Great to have you back Sian!
Always love reading your poems...
I especially love the last verse - shows resolve... Beautifully written.

Francine x

darren thomas

Tue 17th Nov 2009 21:08

Nice to see you back, Sian. I hope you'll share more of your poetry with this crazy,crazy bunch.

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winston plowes

Tue 17th Nov 2009 11:15

Some battles require a fight some require retrete if we are eventually to win, That seems the topic here. We all have our own battles in our own lives... I think many people will relate to this excellent piece in their own way.

Win x

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Tue 17th Nov 2009 11:12

Welcome back Sian, great to see you posting again on WOL. Winston

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