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Sea City

 

Another sea-city has grown up
sand upon sand, what else
stirrings of the deep so loud
it is a wall and little else

of designs fantastic and outlandish
made to survive their day in the heart
here is the latest-

channels open to the sea,
whose crashes, sprays and roars
move closer

defence repaired and repaired again
embellishment imagined, as quickly
put in place

an orderly ship-shape creation
employs attentive hands
and dragging into exile the generation who built it 
the hardest task of all

a plastic shovel thrown and left in temper
by dawn on the sandy plain
hints at what was

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Drunken Sailor ►

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Stu Buck

Tue 9th Jan 2018 13:44

lovely stuff adam. love the onomatopoeic nature of the third verse. sits nicely between the others.

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