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Spring - A Sonnet

Please would you re-send this for me? - I was a little hasty in sending when there was an error in there! My sincere apologies! - Dorinda

 

Spring – A Sonnet

 

Oh bitter wind of winter, never may

Your chilling hostile grip invade the soul

Which is my essence, longs for warmer day

Forbid it be it was my hope you stole

 

Your predecessor, russet autumn breeze,

Fortelling your harsh entrance, deeply grim,

Both overtaking summer’s breath, agrees,

Conspire together to sing nature’s hymn

 

Most pure, most clear, the kindest breeze of all

Indulges me; it’s graciousness, a kiss

Upon my cheek in mercy: spring’s sweet call!

My soul alive – what deeper joy than this?

 

Sweet spring, come soon, do not be late –

And I shall sit, content to wait

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Martin Elder

Sun 14th Jan 2018 14:50

Absolutely fabulous Dorinda. Love it

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Douglas MacGowan

Sat 13th Jan 2018 20:43

Wow, good job! I would be too intimidated to attempt this poetic form, but you do it very well. Nice imagery, too.

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keith jeffries

Sat 13th Jan 2018 18:23

Dorinda, your sonnet is also my hope. Beautifully worded. Thank you. Keith

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Nigel Astell

Sat 13th Jan 2018 15:28

There was an extra spring in your sonnet when both overtaking summer's breath - - - it got sorted.

Loved it

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