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shapeless & transcendent

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I am shapeless, I am
transcendent, I am
moving through birdsong
as dawn gently breaks through
the clouds of my mind
I am weightless, I am
resplendent, I am
ecstatic to find
the keys that release
the mental chains that bind
I am boundless, I am
ever-present, I am
free to perceive
all that I am and all that is me
And all that I am
and all that is me
is the freedom to be
shapeless and transcendent,
weightless and free
I am shapeless, I am
transcendent, I am
moving through birdsong, I am
free to be me

Wytchewoode

WOLOP.nov   transcendent   shapeless

◄ like no other love before

no power defeats the Circle ►

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Steven Dark

Mon 7th Dec 2009 19:55

With pleasure. Please thank the fellow poet who nominated it and I hope the group enjpys reading.

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Isobel

Mon 7th Dec 2009 14:24

Please could you tag this poem with WOLOP.nov so that people may read it as part of a group. I run an informal monthly competition and this poem was nominated by a fellow poet. Thank you.

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Mon 23rd Nov 2009 23:15

Oh yes, this is right up my street!
It's a truly wondrous place to be and one i never tire of entering into. Keep on unlocking the freedom. :-)

Janet.

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Francine

Mon 23rd Nov 2009 23:09

Yes...
This is light and captivating - like a sort of mantra : )

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 23rd Nov 2009 14:56

Sir, I really enjoyed the 'serpent circle' embodied in this work, the symbol of eternity. It is a beautiful piece expressed with clarity and finesse.

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winston plowes

Sat 21st Nov 2009 23:27

A great rythm in this one carefully put together with the recuring themes of Shapeless and translucent. Win

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 20th Nov 2009 22:22

I've read this several times and the last nine lines just stand out. They could be a separate piece. It sounds featherlight, charming.

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