The Poet's Problem
Impulse is the best linguist
So Mr Thoreau thought
And often what is written here
Is spoiled by what is later brought
Yet
All I write and sometimes rhyme
Falls on the page untaught
So needs some tender love and care
Before you see it as you ought
So
The lines you read from any page
Should by your ear be caught
As best words ordered to flow well
With all my meaning simply wrought
But
Maybe my first scribed impulse
Said best what I purport
But is ruined by my later drafting:
I spoiled the pleasure that you sought
220August
Wed 24th Jan 2018 15:34
Very nice! Thanks for sharing...