Rooms
from an idea by Conrad Aiken
The Lounge
Netted windows with fawn roller blinds
lowered a little by their macramé tassels for his forty winks
Shush! Be quiet, he's having his nap, don't make a din -
or completely, when at night
he shovelled the last coal from the bin
concealed in its wooden cabinet
and lowered the heavy lid on the fire to keep it in
The Playroom
The old wind-up gramophone seemed to play
Forties tunes - Broadway Melody and
Drip Drip Drop Little April Showers each day
when the Davey Crockett record smashed.
The tall 'black cupboard' stood by the door
with toys and a pile of Marvel comics
he brought back from the States in the war
The Dining Room
She waited for the key in the lock, the pause in the hall
and the loving, greeting kiss
and began tea as he peeled and quartered an apple
carefully with his penknife
and she poured tea and passed cups
The School Room
Of course there were old desks and huge radiators
and a blackboard that rolled up its wisdom
endlessly
The Garage
No car - but a treasure trove of old tools
In a case, wireless valves and rheostats
gave no hint of their use
The Workroom
You bend the top of the wire into a hook and hold it
beside the stem and twist it round
or thrust it through a carnation from the stem
make a hook and pull back down
ready for another wreath or bride's bouquet
repeat
until the pots of blooms on the floor run out
Lounge
The piano fell into disuse
His Für Elise had been as good as it got
He never had the ear for it
A bedroom
Night-night, sleep well, you can read for ten minutes.
Bureau closed on homework and the ink spill, not yet noticed,
which ended the sad essay, What I did in the summer holidays
School clothes ready on the other bed
A cabin
The loneliness of three bunks
three lockers, three lifejackets
and a porthole
Another lounge
We watched That Was The Week That Was
or Ken Russell's The Music Lovers
and later with television in the background
we were alone,
the huge bay window curtained in velvet
Bedroom
The bottom bunk bed was fine and not uncomfortable
as I dreamed of her
in the room opposite
Cabin 2
Returning to his cabin after docking he found
an open door and a uniformed man
bending over his desk
reading his letters:
Little use in remonstrating -
Hull was the home of UK Customs & Excise
and now he felt sympathy with the crew
who built false pipes in the engine room
made from tins of Old Holborn tobacco
The last cabin
She had known his cabin before.
And now it was hers too:
held between the thrum of the engines
and the uneven sway of the sea
she was unsure of her new life
The Bar
Drinks before dinner
Darts after dinner
And anecdotes!
In return for some small jest
the electrician pouring ink into the bath
of the 'Fridge Engineer -
Jim scrabbling his way out
as the black tide advanced.
He's dead now - murdered in a Glasgow pub.
Saloon
They stood politely for my wife
as we arrived at the table
for the first time
and leaning forward as he sat again
the Third Engineer's tie floated across his soup
and broke the ice
A kitchen
When they arrived at the farm -
daffodils poking through melting snow -
before they could ask about the cottage
she pulled them into the kitchen
with the tiny orphan lamb by the fire
and the kettle steaming on the stove
for a cup of tea
Another bedroom
Kneeling on the bed
he looks down at her hair
spread on the pillow
in sleep
Seminar Room
The fusty fug of a small room
with too many students in it
seated on unmatched chairs
to discuss a Whitman poem
imperfectly understood
Office
Ten research papers explore
the use of psycholinguistics for...
Another dozen tell the way
software for simulating search may...
Kitchen
Old slate slab floor with old blue lino
old blue units with shelves collapsing
under the weight of china
Hospital Room
An endless eternity ending
The view over the town now strangely blurred
A whispered word
She never heard
The bedroom
Kneeling on the bed
He sees stars
in the perfect black
above the shadow trees
And hears an owl
Martin Elder
Sun 28th Jan 2018 17:45
This is a great poem leading the reader from room to room. I can't help feeling that this could lead into a at least a shorty story if not a novel
Nice one