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Edge the hog

I’m edge the hog

been running the road

dodging the rubber

on the darkest of roads

Seen many a good hog,die;

laid flat to the road

for getting the red eye

while running the road. 

Maybe I’m unhinged

adrenaline,drug king

but dodging the rubber

gets me into the 

edge

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◄ Pilgrims Choice

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Comments

DESMOND CHILDS

Sat 27th Jan 2018 22:06

Thank you Ray and Col for your comments. Very much appreciated.


All the best des

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sat 27th Jan 2018 09:39

who can forget the Not the Nine O'Clock News Hedgehog Sandwich sketch. Good luck Edge! And watch out for Ford's new SUV. That's called Edge too. There's serious competition out there. Good stuff Des. Col.

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raypool

Fri 26th Jan 2018 21:14

I think maybe Edge is a metaphor for Mr Big, the one who as a kid would play chicken to get respect. I always find when the mind is taken to ground level it really focusses the attention. Nice one Des.

Ray

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