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A Royal Box

A Royal Box

 

I found myself sitting at the entrance to a cave

it might once have been an aboriginal grave

I sat high above the surrounding landscape

far below in a verdant valley lay a distant lake

 

I could not see above where I sat alone

it was a natural not a man made home

The cave was deep and eerily dark

and in the mountains I could hear a dog bark

 

No one knew I was secreted in this place

nor were others able my footsteps to trace

It was a rare and lofty mirador

an entrance without seats or even a door

 

I had not paid any kind of ticket or fee

it was given by mother nature absolutely free

Birds flew below, around and above

once I saw a ring necked dove

 

The only sound I could hear was a gentle breeze

as I looked afar at the distant seas

I occupied a special place granted only to a few

it had been there since time immemorial this I knew

 

I was not a person of great nobility

nor had I ever received much publicity

Yet here I sat as a king enrobed and royal

on a rocky floor of gravel and soil

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◄ A Living Creation

An Orderly Woman ►

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Jon

Fri 18th Jan 2019 17:04

Hello Keith
Really liked this. An appreciation for things we take for granted rings loud and clear.
Thoughtful as always

Jon

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keith jeffries

Wed 31st Jan 2018 09:38

David & Ray, Thank you for you kind comments. They are much appreciated. Keith

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raypool

Tue 30th Jan 2018 22:48

A most refreshing use of modesty and humility perfectly demonstrating a love of all things natural - to be applauded Keith. Like a scene from Avatar almost!

Ray

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keith jeffries

Tue 30th Jan 2018 10:28

Hello Desmond & Kevin,
thank you for your kind comments. You are right Kevin the locations are close to each other. Keith

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kJ Walker

Tue 30th Jan 2018 08:35

?

Could be a sequel to your previous one.

Cheers Kevin

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