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Drunk & naked in a graveyard

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dead flowers past their summer bloom
entwine the cemetary gate,
clinging grim
like a dying man's hands
that pray, yet prayed too late

drunk & naked in a graveyard
cold skin pale cordite grey
cheek against the friendly stone
hurling like a gargoyle spewing rain
on the wettest Autumn day

let me die, Oh, let me die,
I pray, I pray, I pray,
show me to the hollow ground
where all will finally lay

◄ no power defeats the Circle

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Steven Dark

Fri 27th Nov 2009 15:19

:)

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Beulah

Thu 26th Nov 2009 15:28

a bitch of a hangover mate.

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jane wilcock

Tue 24th Nov 2009 21:02

I love the first verse especially and then the movement into acceptance/resignation

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Francine

Mon 23rd Nov 2009 22:56

This paints a rather pathetic scene that enables the reader to wonder and imagine how they got to this point...

Love the fact that these lines can have more than one meaning...

'cheek against the friendly stone
hurling like a gargoyle spewing rain
on the wettest Autumn day'

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