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van

folds of lace

[like winter smoke]

[like quires of tear stained parchment]

sit heavy against the ruddy

[rust]

of the shabby white van

[there are some noises she cannot hear]

where the man with the limp

[like a pirate she thought at first]

[[still young]]

will drive her to the trees

to touch her again

through winter tears

through folds of lace [like smoke]

 

 

 

 

 

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◄ me and Annie (or is it Annie and i) (or poem which succeeded a period of time in which i only read e.e. cummings)

dramamine blues ►

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Stu Buck

Wed 7th Feb 2018 23:20

thanks steve. i've been reading a lot of e.e. cummings lately (after picking up '73 poems' from the poetry bookshop in hay-on-wye) and i love his use of brackets and space. he almost seems to be writing two or three poems at once. anyway, thanks for commenting im glad you liked it. hope to see you at some point this year for more poetry/ale.

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steve pottinger

Wed 7th Feb 2018 20:09

I really like this piece, Stu. I must have read it three or four times, and relished it on each occasion.

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