van
folds of lace
[like winter smoke]
[like quires of tear stained parchment]
sit heavy against the ruddy
[rust]
of the shabby white van
[there are some noises she cannot hear]
where the man with the limp
[like a pirate she thought at first]
[[still young]]
will drive her to the trees
to touch her again
through winter tears
through folds of lace [like smoke]
Stu Buck
Wed 7th Feb 2018 23:20
thanks steve. i've been reading a lot of e.e. cummings lately (after picking up '73 poems' from the poetry bookshop in hay-on-wye) and i love his use of brackets and space. he almost seems to be writing two or three poems at once. anyway, thanks for commenting im glad you liked it. hope to see you at some point this year for more poetry/ale.