damaged goods
it's a body
purple marks and deep red lines litter the skin
it drags it's limbs
rasping breath
a name tag around it's neck
marks it as being owned
it shuffles between the people
trying to hide
they stare in disgust at its bare skin
their judgement disguising their involvement
they know they did this
they passed the scissors to him
told him to cut the clothes away
they cheered as he did
applauding louder and louder
as the creatures painful yowls got louder
It submitted to dying
as it's owner smiled down at it wincing
just as the light faded in it's eyes
a voice
loud and crude
"you were asking for it wearing such a short skirt"
Martin Elder
Sun 18th Feb 2018 17:11
Excellent. sadly this is all too real in portraying the way that some men view women.
very well written drawing the reader in to believe that you are talking about a woman until the last punch line
Nice one