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Hidden treasure

I can still see

Still smell that smell

The smell of leather

And the way it would creak and crack

Despite the polish

Giving way once too often

The straps wearing thin

Like belts that had seen too much service

Round the corpulent wreck

Of standing room only, trousers

The corners that were broken or split

One of the latches would never easily fasten

And signs of rust had attacked the lock

 

But inside the case was still immaculate

Despite smelling of moth balls and liniment

And a dress a little frayed round the edges

Carefully wrapped in tissue

Saved for that special day

Along with a fox fur wrap

And a linen hat

With a black netted front

These were the most treasured

No pictures on display

All hidden away

Maybe in another suitcase

But that was for another day

When we were ready to find more of what

Had been lost

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◄ Heels

I lay my head ►

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Martin Elder

Wed 21st Feb 2018 16:44

Thanks to Ruby Rose Colin suki and Pat for liking and thanks to Tom and Stu for commenting. I have some vivid memories of this old case among many and it's contents. I don't know where form or when . But it made an impression none the less. Dear oh dear, forgetting things , that's slightly worrying!
Thanks again everybody
Martin

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Tom Harding

Tue 20th Feb 2018 23:37

some very vivid and effective imagery here Martin

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Stu Buck

Mon 19th Feb 2018 08:10

nice imagery martin and i love 'creak and crack' i can smell the leather and hear the groan of the hinges

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