Elbow Yard
Elbow Yard
In Elbow Yard the walls are thin
between this world and the next.
We communicate through clairvoyants
because we couldn’t handle text.
But that’s all right mate,
that’s pretty cool,
you didn’t like clowns
and I’m the fool.
In Elbow Yard the darkness reigns
and death dances out of sight
ready to drag us to his ballroom,
illuminated in pale gaslight.
But that’s all right mate,
we’ll live forever,
we’re indestructible,
we’re oh so clever.
In Elbow Yard the summer sunshine
never reaches into dusty rooms
or settles on the brittle birch branches
hastily gathered into brooms.
But that’s alright mate
we’re young and clean
and there are no corners
where we haven’t been.
In Elbow Yard we sink or swim,
we hit the target or ricochet
around a million could-have-beens,
we’ll live to fight another day -
and that’s alright mate,
we don’t need goodbyes,
we’ll be here next week
under Merrie City skies.
In Elbow Yard the flickering lamps,
sad with the pathos of the world,
close around a leaving figure -
heading where love and warmth are curled.
But that’s alright mate,
as you finally wend
your weary path
beyond ‘The End’
That’s alright mate.
That’s alright friend.
raypool
Wed 21st Mar 2018 20:42
I think this is fine stuff Ian; it has a "do and die" quality with a sort of gritty ethereal undertone. It'll do for me - I think it has a bravery in it which I admire. Well constructed like a folk song format. I won't try too much to analyse it. I don't think it needs too much probing.
Ray