Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Hands open

The hands have remained closed for so long

In the shape of fists

Pointing are stiff and tired

But there are no words

Of love or hate spelled on the whitened knuckles

Just the lines of age

And the tension of muscle and sinew pulled over bone

The veins that stand out on the back of hands

Nothing hidden

Nothing revealed

Yet the outstretched arms begin to shake

Gradually moving from the wrists up the arms

And that which is

Can be no longer

No longer be contained

The fists turn

And the sweaty hands gradually open

To reveal in the right hand

The strongest of the two

A host of butterflies

All beautiful despite being slightly tatty with chewed wings

Each was named

Guilt shame disease pain dirt filth and grime

Alongside anger denial disappointment distrust vanity

Loathing hate spite jealousy and covertness

All danced around the open hand

The most reluctant of the bunch who struggled to fly

Was fear

Whilst the other hand opened to reveal the biggest and most beautiful

Stretching and basking its wings

Slowly It lifts off and flies up and around

Gliding and swooning

High above the hand that once held it enjoying its release

Before finally returning

Resting on the shoulders of its

Former captor

Bathing in the light

Whilst the others one by one fade and die

That which returned remains and is called

LOVE

🌷(2)

◄ she's the one

Airships ►

Comments

Profile image

Martin Elder

Mon 2nd Apr 2018 10:56

Thanks to Pat for liking and to Colin Anya and Andy for commenting.
Your encouragement is much appreciated as I almost didn't post this one

Cheers
Martin

Profile image

Andy N

Mon 2nd Apr 2018 07:49

excellent, Martin. Perfectly paced as always

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sat 31st Mar 2018 20:03

Lots of very thoughtful poetry gracing the pages of WoL at present and this is no exception. I remain ever optimistic too Martin. All the best, Colin.

Profile image

Martin Elder

Sat 31st Mar 2018 15:52

I remain ever optimistic.
peace and Love to all

Martin

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message