The Carer
The Carer
She’s been nipped and bit today by an old girl
puzzled in the folds of yesterday. As she tried
to feed and clean her, acknowledged with shrieks
and skirls, she was fought against with bites
and scratches. When she was tended and quiet,
she combed her hair, grey strands loosening, floating
to pillow and floor. Then, but only then, she said,
she became a little girl again and sang some old song
taught to her by her mam. And she told me this:
“I could see them there, eighty years ago,
sitting in sunlight, a woman counting the strokes,
and I saw myself in her eyes, so just for a moment
I wasn’t sure who I was, as if I were drawn from time,
or a mother had returned to mind her child.”
Laura Taylor
Thu 5th Apr 2018 16:46
Fantastic poem - this line gave me goosebumps:
puzzled in the folds of yesterday.
Wish I'd have written that.
This is such a poignant piece, yet showing the gritty reality of the real hard work of caring. It's terrifying at the same time as making me want to cry.
It's really well structured and intelligently written, as well.
Thank you.