Paradise Lost
Paradise Lost?
Big adjustment. Nothing like retirement.
One minute, I’m your average day to day man -
up at first light, a couple of grapes, then
on with the day job: Emu; Elephant;
Duck Billed Platypus; Lesser Spotted Toad…
biodiversity makes a demand
on imagination. But when I tired,
I thought of her under the tree: first bride,
always smiling, beautiful. Worth a rib;
worth a leg; worth an eye. Worth Paradise?
Well, debateable; but I’ll tell you this -
I passed it down to all the human tribe -
when the woman you love says sink your teeth
into sweet flesh, what price eternal life?
jennifer Malden
Fri 21st Jun 2019 17:01
Hi Terry! Had missed this one completely, but think it's fantastic!
Very clever but also moving. Don't see why it got so little attention, deserved a lot more I think. Keep up the good work.
Jennifer