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Dancing and Shadows

Fairy lights in the bushes

cast no shadows:

weak, weak

 

And you can't see well enough to read

 

But you can see to dance

feet separate from floor

Twirl in the half-cast light

until the sky takes up its own glimmer

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Stu Buck

Tue 24th Apr 2018 11:16

how lovely

you started with a strong image and used every word sparingly.

enjoyed thoroughly.

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