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In Times of Doubt (edited)

If you're not real

then why do many worship you?

If you don't exist

then why are there sacred sites 

in your name? 

If I can't see you

then why are there so many

images of you out there?

If I can't hear your voice

then why do many sing in your name?

If I feel weak, absent-minded, have negative thoughts or no desire to live

then why are you always there to lift me up?

If I weep, feel lonely, guilty, or have sadness in me ...

Then why is it that its you all I can think of

to bring me the inner peace I need?

 

 

 

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Comments

Big Sal

Sat 9th Jun 2018 04:05

Knew it was only a matter of time before you were noticed. Nice job.?

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Sofia Urquiza

Sat 19th May 2018 04:54

I'm glad u took interest Suki

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Sofia Urquiza

Sat 19th May 2018 04:53

Absolutely MC Newberry ?!

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Sofia Urquiza

Sat 19th May 2018 04:52

Thanks Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 7th May 2018 14:36

Faith is a wonderful means of life-support.
For myself, I am content with the proposal that
"there's more to life than we can see".

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suki spangles

Sat 5th May 2018 22:39

Interesting, Sofia.

Cheers,
Suki

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keith jeffries

Sat 5th May 2018 12:23

Sofia,
thank you for this gem which comes from the heart. Well done.
Keith

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Sofia Urquiza

Sat 5th May 2018 10:00

No, thank you ?for noticing the obvious mistake I'd done?

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Sofia Urquiza

Sat 5th May 2018 09:58

Hi Hazel..no it wasn't the last line..I had saved it by mistake. Its complete now ?

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Hazel ettridge

Sat 5th May 2018 09:05

Is the last line really the last line? This poem has a flow that seems to end too abruptly. Or perhaps it doesn't need the last 5 words?

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