Hard lines
She wore the lines impressed on her leathern face
Like the rings of a tree
Her hair hanging down in dark brown tea stained tendrils
Her eyes both blank and sad
Dark marbles starring into nothing
Her skin hung on her bones
Like a tired bag of clothes
Her brow deeply farrowed
Now lies fallow of all the concerns of parenthood
As she moves among the rooms of her flat
The queues at the shops
At the bank
Lost in her own world
Her trekkie bottoms hang on by a miracle of science
Her trainers have seen plenty of service
As have the fingers
That bear the yellow of numerous smokes
Along with the rattled cage of coughing beneath her ribs
Bearing testament to the heavy leaden shuffle
Of her legs and feet
But occasionally
Just occasionally
Through the rasping heaving tired
And suckered teeth that remain between the gaps
A smile breaks the bedevilled lips
For reasons that only she knows
And nobody else will question
Andy N
Sat 16th Jun 2018 06:54
gets off for a great start Martin with the image on the first two lines and then carries in a lovely way. trees are such complex things like humans i think so i think this is a good, no be it excellent start.
but anyway i'm whaffling.
great stuff my friend.
loved it.