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Is it okay?

I'm sitting in the garden wondering

About that other world where

I would be going somewhere,

Doing something,

Being with somebody.

Or is it okay to sit alone

In a garden, drinking tea?

Listening to birds as they fuss

Over sleeping arrangements.

Seagulls and pigeons

Perform a final fly past

Hoping for a bite of supper.

Jackdaws proudly straddling

Chimney pots.

Behind me a fence.

Behind the fence a child

Loud but respectful.

The mother soft and obliging,

Oblivious to my witness.

Urgent sirens call in that other world.

A bee in the honeysuckle.

Sun slips behind rooftop.

Still a glory of light in the sky.

Is it okay to sit alone,

At peace in a garden?

Is it enough?

 

 

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Comments

Frances Macaulay Forde

Tue 29th May 2018 17:49

It's always okay, Hazel.
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Graham Sherwood

Tue 29th May 2018 12:00

It's why we build a garden Hazel. A retreat that we feel safe in, even if the world is just over a flimsy piece of fence, it's yours. Enjoy it!

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raypool

Tue 29th May 2018 10:12

HI Hazel. This has a wonderful impact for me. I think you have answered your final question throughout. The trouble
is that some of us have no concept of just doing nothing well. Nature can help us to find pockets of inactivity in our daily scurryings.

David is one who who knows the healing power of quiet contemplation and I do like that extra verse that your poem has inspired, a real lyrical beauty there too.

All the best, Ray

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Hazel ettridge

Tue 29th May 2018 05:31

Where is that from, David? It's stunning.

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