Walking to the Bar
I choose carefully
my steps;
more carefully
than my blatent
words.
Dandy Mo stares
at the 'bill of fayre'
- we count our change -
"Yes lads?" came
the bar-staff's
practiced pronouncement.
Words & foto Tommy Carroll
Hi Tommy
I am new and just stumbled on you - as one does round here. I'm here to learn, contribute and have fun.
No-one else has commented here so I've nothing to go on. The first verse is subtle and clever. I like it. The second one escapes me. I cannot see the 'message. Am I missing something ? Or is it I live on foreign shores and don't understand UKians ?
Don ?
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Tommy Carroll
Wed 13th Jun 2018 19:14
Don hi, the second verse is an attempt to buy drink in a pub/bar ?