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THE SILENCE WHEN IT SNOWS.....

Have you ever noticed the silence when it snows...?, Like a blanket that muffles the noisy world below, Pockets of peace dancing to the ground, Like angels.......earth bound, Frowns turn into fun, Tears become crystalised and shatter, Pain becomes numb, Steam across industrial landscape, Disguising the towns gruesome face, Under a mask of pure white grace, Colourfull hats and scalfs clash against the infinity of blankness, Almost like you could pluck them from the vastness, Mystical gentleness, and the silence is golden....., The smile on the snowman, God is in the snowflake, Each one crafted to perfection, A beautifull idea to ease the aggression, Everybody pauses,the world stands still for a second, Delays.......but they knew it was inevitable, I laugh inside,like the child in me loves the disruption, Society forced to live without instruction, Just for the day.....i love the cold on my nose..... Have you ever noticed the silence when it snows......

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 23rd Jan 2010 23:04

Now as you mention it, yes! Great piece of writing, cheers Jeff

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Francine

Sun 20th Dec 2009 15:58

Beautifully expressed Shane!
I miss the snow, but you let me experience the affects of it again : )

Great line:
'Mystical gentleness, and the silence is golden'
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Sun 20th Dec 2009 11:04

I really like this poem it captures just how I feel when it snows, it brings out the child in me ha ha...... It is snowing as I write this.... love it Christmas great!! ;-))
TC ;-)

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Rachel McGladdery

Sun 20th Dec 2009 10:23

I have woken up to fresh snow this morning so this was lovely to read.
I love the line 'God is in the snowflake', one of those "wish I'd written that" moments.
Rachel
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