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Summer Eve

The sweet smell of marijuna in the air

Young guys of all sexes laughing at and with  and at each other

You have to learn to mock yourself

My pretensions, my silences, my backward glance

We have to leave the young to enjoy their youth for they shall inherit the world and all that is in it shall be theirs

So crazy to hold on to what we must pass on

Like pass the parcel or chinese whispers

The message will get through if solely in the laughter of a hot summer's eve

I am content with this dispensation

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◄ All these many ill-fated days

A ladder to the stars ►

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keith jeffries

Tue 3rd Jul 2018 00:17

John,
A poem which encapsulates the cyclical nature of life so well. There is the temptation to deride the young as we ourselves grow older but we too were once like them. President Franklin Delano Roosevelt once said that a teacher of his ( a Dr Peabody ) belived that human progress was moving in a better and more productive direction, that inspite of war and tragedy we are heading along the right path slowly but surely. I hope that the young of today will realise their potential to create a world better than the one we bequeath to them.

Your poem stimulates the imagination and gives hope at a time when many despair of the younger generation.

Thank you for this,
Keith

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