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A ladder to the stars

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If you open your heart to the misery

Of those who live without hope

If you learn to walk in another’s steps

 And learn not to avert your gaze

If you give all that you have to give

And see with the eyes of a child

You will learn

Not to count on your money, my friend,

Its value comes and goes,

Instead, count your hours and count your days

Your minutes, seconds, breaths

And please do all that you can do

To lift the misery from those suffering pain and loss.

For self-sacrifice is the currency of love, my friend. 

That is all that remains:

As time flashes by, my friend,

Glinting in the sky,

As the angels fly on high. 

 

◄ Summer Eve

Sepsis ►

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John Marks

Wed 4th Jul 2018 10:00

Thanks Graham, Keith and Brian. Thank you all very much for taking the trouble to comment on this poem. We all have to answer to ourselves, Brian, for what we do with any money we have. It is the pursuit of money that soaks up so much of many people's time and the value of money does change over time. When helping to bring up five kids every penny counted, now i can afford to be more giving.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 3rd Jul 2018 15:28

Brilliant words here John..............

........."You will learn
Not to count on your money, my friend,
Its value comes and goes,
Instead, count your hours and count your days
Your minutes, seconds, breaths"

Just back from a family holiday too. Priceless days/hours/minutes!

Iron and Wine a favourite of mine too so all brilliant.

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Tue 3rd Jul 2018 14:59

I like the poem, but I sort of question the sentiment. In my experience when people talk about giving money they are often talking about other peoples' money, not their own.

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keith jeffries

Tue 3rd Jul 2018 14:55

John,
Thank you for this poem, the content of which should inspire more people to look beyond themselves and to those far less fortunate. Money is such a dominating and powerful commodity which can be used for the common good or for self alone. This poem echos the words of Wisdom and the Prophets.
Keith

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