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Applause

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Don't you know
it's just a rage
a tempest brewed
from grape not sage-
in all the world
there's not a stage
not tread by feet already.

And so I bow
and bid me out
you cared for nought
nor gave a shout
as all that is
has come about
with out you being ready.

re-edit 1981
words and foto T Carroll...

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Tommy Carroll

Sun 22nd Jul 2018 12:26

Ta lah Tommy

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Becky Who

Tue 17th Jul 2018 21:51

I really like the rhythm and rhyming pattern in this - the way the 2 verses match.

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