racha

talking to a brick wall

Monday 23rd July 2018 11:06 pm (first posted Saturday 21st July 2018 6:53 pm)

talking to you is a headaches

waking you up at 4 am

talking to you are period cramps

talking to you is a baby crying

for four nights and a day

talking to you is waking up to a monday

talking to you is biting down

on a grain of sand

talking to you fells lonely

talking to you is the pain of

of one sided love

talking to you is failing your life

talking to you is despair

talking to you is public humiliation

talking to you is sleep depravation

talking to you is what i hate

talking to you is talking to

a wall that hits you in the face

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Comments

Sat 21st Jul 2018 21:46

thanks jane and keith and i will change the name of the poem

Sat 21st Jul 2018 20:37

Racha,
A good and honest poem. You should have given it the title ¨Talking to a Brick Wall ¨.
Thanks
Keith

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Sat 21st Jul 2018 19:08

I find this poem interesting. I like it. It reminds me of why there is the phrase "talking to you is like talking to a wall"

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