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catching surprises

If the world is full of surprises

would I catch some luck

if I jump higher

would I catch a smile

from an infamous desire

would I catch light

from a flaming fire

or would I just fall into a satire

be consumed and tired

get burned and be called a liar

if the world is full of surprises

would I ever meet stars

if I walk more through dark lanes

would I talk to the moon

if I climb more mountains

would I ever find answers

if I unlock rusty chains

or doesn't it work this way ? 

life is different than a game ?

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racha chafik

Tue 24th Jul 2018 10:32

Thank you Martin Colin so much ?

<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 24th Jul 2018 08:37

well done Racha - lovely poem and audio. Thanks for posting. Colin.

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Martin Elder

Tue 24th Jul 2018 00:12

A lovely piece of poetry Racha and as Brian says, good to hear you read it

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racha chafik

Mon 23rd Jul 2018 23:51

Thank you anya

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racha chafik

Mon 23rd Jul 2018 23:47

Thank you I'm glad I read it

<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 23rd Jul 2018 23:44

Good to hear your audio Racha...well read!

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