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The Unfading You

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I know the melody that runs within,

flooding over the arid land,

I know the whispers that left her footsteps,

Making one after another castles of sand.

Oh Time ! I feel your SnickersĀ 

that haunts me day and night,

Yet the touch never fadesĀ 

Nerver fades her first sight.

I can't my sell my love

In the balance of her refusal

What I got is a treasure unending,

You live and thrive as eternal persual.

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◄ Written In a moment of Crisis

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Fri 3rd Aug 2018 05:19

Thanks Jane.Valuable comments from you.I will try my level best to bring uniformity in next one.

<Deleted User> (19836)

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 07:43

This is a heartfelt poem but the words and emotion don't seem to flow as easily as your other poems. A very nice effort though!?

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