Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Written In a moment of Crisis

entry picture

Who am I ?

A vagrant,a poor,an unemployed youth?-

as you say .

Possibly not.

My lines are my identity

My pen is my weapon

to rip off the cobwebs .

And your love is the

the unending wealth,

a blessing forever.

No crown,no kingdom I have for sure,

But I have the purest

feelings of your heart which

fades not like the rusty sceptre.

Yes,I am poet as you know,

A poet with thousands of wings.

Time will bury me in oblivion.

Yet I live in your heart.

That's the life I want.

 
🌷(4)

◄ Camphor

The Unfading You ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (19836)

Thu 2nd Aug 2018 07:38

A rich man is truly the one in touch with his feelings. You are a very rich man! I especially liked the line "My lines are my identity". I can totally relate to this.

Well done...a great poem!

Profile image

AVISHEK GHOSH

Mon 30th Jul 2018 15:59

Thank You all for your valuable comments.I am deeply inspired

<Deleted User> (9882)

Mon 30th Jul 2018 13:22

great poem Avishek and chock full of great lines. Thanks for sharing.






Rose ?

<Deleted User> (18118)

Sun 29th Jul 2018 20:33

This poem has a classic feel.
Really enjoyed.

Hannah

Profile image

raypool

Sun 29th Jul 2018 19:24

Really touching ! Reminds me of Khalil Gibran. High thinking.

Ray

Profile image

Martin Elder

Sun 29th Jul 2018 16:29

That is a great line 'My pen is my weapon' It kind of reminds of a song title. I am a writer not a fighter.

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message