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possibly a extra go too many for my liking here, marianne but i did enjoy this! x
yes it should have been win. I will change. thankyou for kind comments. x
Should it be 'epitaphs read'?
I am a shredded ribbon,
a suffering jet stream behind him,
a withering farcical lace stapled to my face
and it will not unveil
and it will not.
This particular section is so strong it stands as a poem on its own Marianne. Brilliant. Win
I think you are brilliant with words, tho I don't understand them all. But I do like this poem, and have read it a few times, it draws me back.
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Thu 31st Dec 2009 15:52
I'm going on a Marianne splurge this coming week, to read all your November/December poems again.
One thing you might do for the new decade pf poetry is clear up 'its' meaning 'belonging to'. Just remember the 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is'. Your best must be the best. If you wish, I will point out any spelling errors I see, but only with your permission. Editting is easier now that the corrections don't catapult to the front every time.
Happy New Year. I think 2010 will be your poetry lift-off!