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Hi Marianne, i read this poem several times to fully digest its meaning. Each time i read it there was something more to follow. To me, and though the clue is in the title, its speaks of death, both as its victim and its witness, perhaps the death of love. Very touching. brilliant in fact.
nice work.
Mike
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Lovely poem Marianne. "still and built with absences" and the rusty locket do it for me. You are a very poetical poet!
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John Turner
Tue 12th Jan 2010 20:47
Larken-esque. Like something from High Windows.