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The Assassination

Brief hours flicker over the room
like memories of the infirm - the winks of gold
scampering through the air, still and built
with absences -
 
and shot, with a rusty locket,
a frame curls, like sepia in leaves
and dust in throats, on the bed, heaving
reluctantly the breath
 
that feeds a love that never escaped lips,
that want;
lost in a growing space
of words now spent,
 
with the fingerprints on the inside
from the mirage of the outside, and
strangled radio signals, like clawing school yards,
rasp on the eyelashes
 
of the colour of the person fading away.

◄ Repeat to Fade

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John Turner

Tue 12th Jan 2010 20:47

Larken-esque. Like something from High Windows.

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Noetic-fret!

Fri 8th Jan 2010 17:37

Hi Marianne, i read this poem several times to fully digest its meaning. Each time i read it there was something more to follow. To me, and though the clue is in the title, its speaks of death, both as its victim and its witness, perhaps the death of love. Very touching. brilliant in fact.

nice work.

Mike

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 8th Jan 2010 14:57

Lovely poem Marianne. "still and built with absences" and the rusty locket do it for me. You are a very poetical poet!

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