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Chocolate-Covered Razor Blades

I just want to pound my face in the pavement
Till there's blood everywhere
Living Without You is worse than death
I wish you were in my room 
For I can lose myself in you
I promise I'll stop bitching about my depression if you come back
This situation has got me at my worst
So talk some sense to me cause I'm about to break this promise
Before I even turned 26 I know I love you but I can't get my head straight
I'm sorry I'm trying I'm just defeated right now
Promise I care more than I show
I realized that I'm just a lowlife, self-centered and I'll never be as successful as him
I'll pummel my brain into the cracks of the cement

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raypool

Fri 3rd Aug 2018 14:48

A lot of angst and self defeatism here Damon. It feels like there is no resolution. I think Colin is on my line of thought - squeeze it like plasticine til it shapes up . Good ingredients.
Hope that helps!

Ray

<Deleted User> (13762)

Fri 3rd Aug 2018 09:29

excellent title Damon but difficult to comment on the content - keep calm and carry on to quote a well-worn phrase. All the best, Col.

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