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THE PASSING OF A BILL - a longtime friend remembered

We'd known each other for forty years

Meeting in a local pub,

With so many familiar faces

At times it was like a club.

 

A Scot who'd emigrated

From Aberdeen to far B.C.

And become an English professor

At a top university.

 

But still drawn back to Blighty

To rent a central flat

In time for yearly Wimbledon

And evenings of cheerful chat.

 

He said he'd be back this year

For another tournament

And duly I expected him

To be here for that event.

 

But nothing further came my way

And that concerned me greatly

For both email and the telephone

Proved unsuccessful lately.

 

Today the reality came to me

When going online to search

In shock I saw "obituary"

And my heart suffered a lurch.

 

My old pal of so many years

Had passed some months before

And all my worst suspected fears

Hurt me to the core.

 

All the laughs, the chat and fun,

Had gone without me knowing

And it was left to an online page

That was cruelly showing

 

The news that he'd be taken ill

And passed before I knew

To leave me saying "Goodbye Bill"

So sorry that it's you.

 

But you are still alive my friend

In the memories that I keep

In mind to bring you back to life

When I'm inclined to weep.

.............................................................

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 6th Aug 2018 18:11

Hi Brian -welcome aboard! Thanks for the supportive comment. It was not news I wanted to know but the
silence led me to suspect something of the sort had
happened - and sadly, I was right. The downside of
advancing years, I guess, but still difficult to accept as
a reality after so MANY years.
JC - thanks, as always, for commenting so positively.
Don - keep timing that rhyming!
You show the way
With what you say!
Kate G - your sympathetic understanding is much appreciated.
P.S. Thanks too for the "likes". Bill
took a delight in human nature and
telling stories. I'm sure he would
have appreciated what is said here.

Brian Blanchard

Mon 6th Aug 2018 14:58

Nice tribute Mark...so sorry for the loss of your friend.

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John Coopey

Mon 6th Aug 2018 09:59

On top of your game,MC.

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Don Matthews

Sun 5th Aug 2018 23:05

Rhyme can deliver any sort of message, from sadness to fun.

D?

<Deleted User> (19913)

Sun 5th Aug 2018 22:28

A beautiful tribute that resounds with all those who have suffered a loss such as this. Beautiful.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 5th Aug 2018 19:44

Hannah and Brian- thank you for the kind comments. These
lines followed my discovery today - and Sunday has to be
the worst day for getting this kind of news, doesn't it?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 5th Aug 2018 18:41

A lovely poem Mark. I'm pleased Bill was a tennis fan.

<Deleted User> (18118)

Sun 5th Aug 2018 17:54

Sad, poignant piece.
A hard way to find out but Bill won't be forgotten.

Hannah

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