you make me want to buy a basque
to be wasp waisted
I linger by the lingerie
I need to get a negligee
and mules!
pink fluffy slip-on ones
to go with my painted toes!
and seven push-up bras
underwired and lacy
one for every day of the week
and all quite racy!
and perfume
a bucket load of perfume.
so we can drown together
in scent
and lace
and my cleavage!
Hi Frances - I guess I wanted to give the poem a sort of breathless excitement, hence the "I's" and "ands"! It didn't need to flow poetically so much as pant passionately!
Frances Macaulay Forde
Tue 5th Jan 2010 00:44
Again I love the sentiments of this Ann - the setting, the visuals and the smells. But I do feel it needs one more edit. Perhaps too many "I"s & a couple of "and"s could go...
Good stuff though!
I love this, what with my own penchant for lingerie and all. Have a lacy frothy pink scented new year.
Love
Rachel
xxx
Ann-Well written-sounds like the best way to drown to me. Happy new year
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Tue 5th Jan 2010 09:12
a Good,snowy Rossendale morning to you.Mummy Foxgloves.loved the poem,is the 'drowning'offer open to all? yes? wheres my snowshoes! Steaming Stefanxx