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The Feather

The Feather

 

Hiding just behind my eyes,
those tears I work hard to disguise.
I want to scream cry howl shout,
"Please don't take me out,
let me stay, this is my forever home,
my forever place my heart place."

 

I know we have to go.. I know,
so I just cannot let it show.
Its ripping the life out of this tired body.
Leaving all, leaving my heart.
Where will I be, what will I be when we part.

 

I am a feather blown this way and that by life.
All I wanted was to be your lover your wife.
Lying beside me oblivious sleeping.
Whilst inside I am weeping.

 

"What are you doing?" You ask briefly awake.
"Writing." I feel more than hear you moan.
I am lost alone,
just a feather waiting to be blown.

 

© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

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Hazel ettridge

Thu 16th Aug 2018 18:26

The futility of it all. Made me think of all the abandoned feathers I find, beautiful and alone in the woods.

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Thu 16th Aug 2018 17:19

Passionate.

Big Sal

Thu 16th Aug 2018 15:43

From weeping to writing in one leap of faith. Powerful women always land on their feet and keep running. Strength of the soul often can't be measured, but your writing comes pretty close to it. Loved it.?

<Deleted User> (19913)

Thu 16th Aug 2018 14:00

Taylor, this was wrenching. The heartache palpable. Well done. I feel like giving you a big hug.

<Deleted User> (19421)

Thu 16th Aug 2018 11:42

Wonderful ending!

Cheers

DJB

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Martin Elder

Thu 16th Aug 2018 11:08

Love the description of a feather
Nice one Taylor

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Hugh

Thu 16th Aug 2018 09:34

Another feather in your cap.

<Deleted User> (19836)

Thu 16th Aug 2018 08:21

Bravo! These words are bursting with emotion. I love it!❤

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 16th Aug 2018 07:41

Beautiful.

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