who betrayed rhyming poetry to its literary death?
who betrayed rhyming poetry to its literary death?
who poisoned it and made it take its final breath
who cut it up into words of just prose
poets did,
poets did i suppose
with thier quirky non rhyming, non flowing literate shite
they put out the light of rhyming poetry from the new books on the shelves
because they wanted to make themselves look good
with theirĀ eloquent poems that take an english degree to be understood
as if the man on the street ever could
but the man on the street still remembers the days
when poems used to rhyme with a rhythmic turn of phrase
and stick in a persons head
so they make up their own dirty limericks up instead
and why is poetry dying?
because the poets the only ones who read each others work
and they are spying
trying to make make a poem so clever
it can never be completely understood!
<Deleted User> (7164)
Tue 5th Jan 2010 17:36
Well you certainly created a reaction with this one didn't you Daniel?
I think we need to watch out for Craig. He 'sounds' so like someone else on here. I hope he has a sense of humour if he continues to comment in this vein. Respect for your reply in response. I am not worthy! :-)
In my personal opinion i think rhymes help when listening to and reading performance poetry. Deep, meaningful and too much metaphor gets lost unless read by a seasoned performer who knows how to capture and engage an audience using pause, intonations and eye contact etc...
I like rhyme too and cliches might become obsolete when life is obliterated. Life is a cliche for many so some things will be used again and again but occasionally someone will put an extra twist to it to make it a little more original.
For me, that's the clever part though i don't claim to be good at it. :-)
Great comments from the others here.
Janet.x