Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

The Fledgling

The Fledgling

 

I hear your persistant call,
as you sit upon that crumbling wall.
Softly feathered tiny bird
It's time to go have you not heard.

 

The nest is but a memory,
as you follow your parents from tree to tree.
'Hey mum hey dad come on feed me,
I'm hungry now I need my tea.'

 

A juicy bug crawls on the ground,
you approach it carefully without a sound.
Gobbling him up is no bother,
as overhead your parents hover.

 

Your confidence begins to grow.
You no longer need mum and dad in tow.
Off into the world you fly,
disappearing into the pale blue sky.

 

© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

 

🌷(7)

◄ There is Beauty

Cooking up a Storm ►

Comments

Profile image

John Coopey

Fri 24th Aug 2018 21:04

Poor bug!

Profile image

Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 24th Aug 2018 20:08

Thank you for all your support and encouragement. It is appreciated very much..?

Big Sal

Fri 24th Aug 2018 14:36

I love birds so you know I loved this piece. However it's taken is beautiful, and the last line/stanza is wonderful.?

Profile image

Hugh

Fri 24th Aug 2018 13:02

An excellent example of how quickly time flies.
Such an effective couplet in the middle.
"Hey mum hey dad come on feed me,
I'm hungry now I need my tea."
Brilliant!

<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 24th Aug 2018 11:20

Like it Taylor but the question is...when are you going to
re-point that wall?

<Deleted User> (19836)

Fri 24th Aug 2018 11:16

Love it Taylor...all young must eventually spread their wings and fly!❤ Beautiful

Profile image

Jon Stainsby

Fri 24th Aug 2018 09:25

We have to let go eventually.

Jon x

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message