Daydreaming
This perpetual daydream
drifting off into the sublime
Picturesque enchantment serranated by cohesive rhymes
A superlative line to all of your expressions for they surely are devine
Toiling deadlock, I stand still defined
Only shaped by exuding light exlempary of a shrine
Though hollow as a well with no end in sight
plummet into the aspiration I will
plummet with all my might
Such imaginitive vision
such an inventive tale
misconstrued with insight
Again the heart prevails
Phillip Kelly
Mon 10th Sep 2018 21:26
Wo
The grammar lexis in your writing is really very sdvanced and in this poem the continual complex lexis gives a sense of gliding and flying and continual floaty graceful movement
A superlative line to all of your expressions for they
surely are devine
I especially like this poem because its packed with emotion..... And the way you stand alone line SURELY ARE DEVINE
Works perfectly