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Beyond the Trees

Beyond the Trees


Beyond the trees in a deep dark hole,
lives a fox and his friend the mole.
The mole did not know that his friend ate mole meat,
for he could see no further than his feet.

 

The mole brought the fox a gift of worms,
which managed to keep them on good terms.
Although the fox's glance would have told a different tale,
had Mr Mole been able to surveil.

 

A winter chill swept through their den,
the fox began to feel hungry again.
Now the mole certainly was no fool,
and realised he needed to keep his cool.

 

If he could find no more worms,
how would he keep them on good terms?
When he pushed his nose up through the ground,
this is what the little mole found.

 

He heard a noise right under a log,
and there he found a juicy frog.
Off he went with his gift,
he knew it would give his friend a lift.

 

The fox enjoyed his juicy frog,
which mole had found under a log.
He was so happy that in return,
he gave his friend the mole a juicy worm.

 

This tale is fraught with danger for the mole,
the situation is beyond his control.
There sits in the den an uneasy truce,
unless the fox's natural instincts are let loose.
So the mole never rests for more than ten,
while the fox lies slumbering in the den.

 

© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

 

 

 

 

 

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 26th Nov 2018 20:47

Thank you Po (I love the Monika). I enjoy this type of writing a poetic story written in rhyme..

Big Sal

Tue 28th Aug 2018 19:22

I have written several children books - none of which I have yet published, but I still find the hardest part is finding a reliable artist I know to collaborate with and the time to spare (I don't have the money for collaborations these days though as well). Always things going on, lives to live, things to do, but I still have these on my to-do list.

I liked this Taylor, it reminded me of the song "In the Woods Somewhere" by Hozier. Always suspenseful, always worth reading into.?

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Martin Elder

Tue 28th Aug 2018 16:23

You definitely have a gift for children's writing with this piece.


Nice one Taylor

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Tue 28th Aug 2018 12:12

Taylor, I absolutely love the way you write. I think you would be wise, if interested of course, in writing children's books. I was able to picture every line along with a page and picture. I suggest you find yourself an illustrator and get to work.

A wonderful imagination you have! ❤? Jane

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Hugh

Tue 28th Aug 2018 12:11

The kids will enjoy the mole story,they'll be craving for more mole.

Mole sequel,

I am a mole and I live in the park.{with a fox!}
I don't like the day I prefer the dark.
With no light in my tunnel below,
I've come up today to say hello.

I'm going to the market to buy a box,
So I can live in it and hide from the fox.
I'll live in the box under my hill.
If he eats us all up it will make him ill.

The tale is scary with danger for the mole,
The situation is beyond his control.
But there is light over the mole hill,
The fox hunters are out hunting, for foxes to kill.

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