I have felt the ruinous touch of time,
Ya,Time.
Many a times i am traumatized
By the facny of life,
Ya Life for sure.
I am in a trance to never awake,
the ripples touch my feet
I am in Lithe
numb in the lap of hyacinth..
I fell the every rhythm of my pulse
May not....
The tapestry keeps folding and unfolding
over and anon.
I'm lost in the riddle -
Have I been sleeping
or awake forever ?
Thanks Rose for your helpful comment. I have done few changes after your advice. Keep encouraging me thus.Thanks a lot again.
<Deleted User> (9882)
Fri 31st Aug 2018 12:47
love it Avishek...would have finished with
'will I be asleep or awake forever?'...?
shall I get my coat or not? ?
Rose ?
The tapestry keeps folding and unfolding...what a line...great Avishek..?
Thanks Big Sal for your so kind words.Thanks a lot.
Big Sal
Thu 30th Aug 2018 14:57
Loved the hyacinth line Avishek, another great piece. Your work gets better and better the longer you remain here, keep up the artistic progression.?
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AVISHEK GHOSH
Fri 31st Aug 2018 13:44
Thanks Taylor for your constant love and support.