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Riddle

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I have felt the ruinous touch of time,

Ya,Time.

Many a times i am traumatized

By the facny of life,

Ya Life for sure.

I am in a trance to never awake,

the ripples touch my feet

I am in Lithe

numb in the lap of hyacinth..

I fell the every rhythm of my pulse

May not....

The tapestry keeps folding and unfolding

over and anon.

I'm lost in the riddle -

Have  I  been sleeping

or awake forever ?

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◄ Weed

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Fri 31st Aug 2018 13:44

Thanks Taylor for your constant love and support.

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Fri 31st Aug 2018 13:42

Thanks Rose for your helpful comment. I have done few changes after your advice. Keep encouraging me thus.Thanks a lot again.

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Fri 31st Aug 2018 12:47

love it Avishek...would have finished with

'will I be asleep or awake forever?'...?

shall I get my coat or not? ?




Rose ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 30th Aug 2018 19:23

The tapestry keeps folding and unfolding...what a line...great Avishek..?

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Thu 30th Aug 2018 18:51

Thanks Big Sal for your so kind words.Thanks a lot.

Big Sal

Thu 30th Aug 2018 14:57

Loved the hyacinth line Avishek, another great piece. Your work gets better and better the longer you remain here, keep up the artistic progression.?

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