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THE HEATHER ON THE HEATH

THE HEATHER ON THE HEATH                                                                        

The feather in my cap I found

in the heather on the heath

my feet they barely touched the ground

not the heather nor the heath

for I was the bird that flew all round

the heather and the heath.

 

The heather on the heath she blooms

a carpet purple blue

the bird will rest awhile, keen eye

upon the royal view

and looking out across the heath

my love for heather grew.

 

I bared my soul to the love I found

by the heather on the heath

our lips swapped vows as we tumbled down

in the heather on the heath

and the feather in my cap, my crown,

my love to me bequeathed.

 

The heather on the heath, its colour

drains with seasons’ cold

bare heather winters long before

its glory hue takes hold

and new lives midst this ebb and flow

are blessed as they unfold.

 

The feather in my cap is fading

now the heather covered heath

is where I go to hear birds sing

and watch the heather glow.

Last time a linnet called, took wing

to mark where I must go.

 

My ash lies on the heather now

the heather on the heath

a fall of rain will wash the dust

from the heather to the heath

and now it’s trickled through the earth

I’m the heather and the heath.

 

The feather in my hair I found

in the heather on the heath.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 15th Sep 2018 08:55

Beautiful ballad Peter. It reminds me of going up to Strontian in the Highlands of Scotland every year with our children...thank you

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Laura Taylor

Fri 14th Sep 2018 11:57

This is gorgeous, Peter. As Adam says, it feels like an old ballad.

I'm guessing this is a 'form' poem? I'm crap with form, so if it is, educate me ?

It puts me in mind of The Wild Mountain Thyme, which is an incredibly special song for me.

Love it. It flows so well and evokes so many images, and is like a feather itself, on the mind.

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Adam Whitworth

Fri 14th Sep 2018 10:28

lovely as an old ballad

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 14th Sep 2018 06:50

Beautiful. This touched me very deeply.

Jon

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