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The Stake To The Sunflower

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You might have struggled to escape me
yet your tendrils held me to you.
I was far too implacable for any living thing
though strangely bound to you, sweet-sight.
How could I not recognize you as my wife?
We were as one standing for summer.
Now you see me, by fractions, 
fly madly from this child's bow.
Yourself carried off: 
a fine subject for that painter.
When we meet again, in the garden's dark corner,
we shall be friends. Watch wagtail wag 
poppy pop and laugh at the red-hot poker,
swaying where we once pushed and pulled.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 21st Sep 2018 18:17

Deeply touching poem...thank you. ?

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Adam Whitworth

Fri 21st Sep 2018 15:46

You're welcome Kate. I appreciate your comments.

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Fri 21st Sep 2018 14:24

I felt like I was intruding into a secret moment in reading this Adam. Beautiful.

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