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HINDSIGHT

My bird's eye view...
Blurred by you.
My 3rd eye, blue.
Not hue...
But my mood. 
I brood for my shrew.
Wouldn't tame ya...
Or blame ya. 
Stayed true to my cool.
Withdrew to my brew. 
A poet, yet stoic
When you needed my fuel. 
Left you all alone
Undisturbed bayou.
A love that once burned...
Now in an urn. 
Our meeting's been adjourned.
Been spurned by you.

   

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 11th Oct 2018 05:02

Very lyrical nice flow great rhythm and rhyme..?

Big Sal

Thu 11th Oct 2018 02:55

Fucking great way to carry that rhyme. I know I probably sound like a broken record by now, but I don't read much rhyming poetry besides my own - so it's refreshing to read. Nice job on all of these pieces man.?

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Jezer Urena

Wed 10th Oct 2018 23:30

Word.

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