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Joy of Aging

It’s time to wake up

I go snap, crackle and pop.

The joy of aging.

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Jezer Urena

Sun 14th Oct 2018 15:45

Thanks for the comment. It’s actually my first haiku. It was inspired after reading the haikus written by other poets. After decades of sport, there’s pain after the glory, but I’d change nothing. To be a little cliche, I am like fine wine, I get better as I age.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 14th Oct 2018 14:02

Hits the mark! But the mind can manage most things that
come along, given the chance - and the humour!

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Don Matthews

Sat 13th Oct 2018 23:58

Has all the ingredients of a clever, well-thought-out fun haiku..?

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