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Grandparents

 

Both of you have changed my life,

You give me everything I need.

You give me all your love and support,

You helped me to succeed.

You're both such beautiful people,

Inside and out.

I will love you both forever,

For sure, without a doubt.

Sometimes when you look at me,

I know what you are thinking.

You're hoping I wont turn into 

someone who is always drinking.

You're wondering if im happy

And how I feel today,

You're wondering if im struggling,

Like I did back in the day.

I want you both to know,

I am happy and content.

I have food in my fridge 

And I always pay my rent.

I work really hard

With everything I do

I am very proud of who I am

And it is all thanks to you.

I love you both with all my heart

You are everything to me

Its something I never say to you,

Im just hoping that you see.

If you ever worry,

About who I will become,

Just know all my good sides

I took them from my mum.

I am wise and smart enough,

To know what Not to do,

And once again ill say

This is because of both of you.

I want to say thank you

For everything you did,

For everything you do today,

And back when I was a kid.

You're the strongest bravest people,

I'v had throughout my life

I thank god that I have you

Before I sleep each night.

I hope you are both healthy

And keeping eachother strong

Because this is the best family,

In which I could belong.

 

 

 

Lots of love,

Your granddaughter

Caoimhe June 

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Caoimhe June Jane Ryan

Fri 19th Oct 2018 18:44

Big Sal - I love rap! I think my passion of rhyming started from listening to rap at a young age. It's one of my favourite genre's of music if not my favourite. I will have a listen to this song. Thank you!! Xx

Big Sal

Fri 19th Oct 2018 14:52

I echo Jon's sentiment. Beautiful piece very worthy of preservation.

Here is a link to a song from one very good rapper about his grandparents - you may fancy a listen even if you don't like rap. The song brought tears to my eyes, much like dedication poetry easily does. .?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R2aD5G9B74s

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Caoimhe June Jane Ryan

Fri 19th Oct 2018 09:02

Yes Hugh! They were overwhelmed.
My grandparents are my world. And they should know it! ? thank you for your comments x

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Hugh

Fri 19th Oct 2018 08:43

A grand poem flowing with love.I would have liked to have been there when they first read this.I bet they were overwhelmed.Well done.
"I hope you are both healthy
And keeping each other strong
Because this is the best family
In which I could belong."
Great lines.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 19th Oct 2018 08:10

Beautiful poem?

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Caoimhe June Jane Ryan

Fri 19th Oct 2018 07:54

Thanks you guys. My grandparents like it very much also ??

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Fri 19th Oct 2018 06:02

Beautiful

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 18th Oct 2018 21:17

Beautiful.

<Deleted User> (18118)

Thu 18th Oct 2018 21:02

How beautiful.
Filled with love.

Hannah

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