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webs worth weaving

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Dream with the fishes

Grant some wishes

Heartfelt messages

Sent in passages

 

A tunnel

meant to be

Time backwards

X's three.

 

Universal magic

collides like traffic

on a one way street

 

To a new reality

you meet your destiny

an epiphany

contradictory

to your subconscious mind

 

Vibes,

Tribes,

Wives

....and symphonies.

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◄ Shadows

Dream sequence ►

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Big Sal

Mon 22nd Oct 2018 13:03

The condensed rhyme made for a 'web worth weaving'. I agree with Taylor about the lyrical quality of such a piece, so well done on it.?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 21st Oct 2018 19:29

It sang to me with beauty..such a lyrical poem..thank you.?

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