A Sting In The Tale
A Sting In The Tale
The throbbing drone
borne upon a summer breeze,
that moves the grass gently
and whispers through the trees.
The honeycomb
dribbles onto plates at high teas.
We take for granted
simple pleasures such as these.
From the mountain pastures
to the shores of tranquil seas,
they bob and weave and buzz
on their busy working sprees.
To the flower’s lock
they are natures keys,
spreading the pollen.
Hooped intricacies.
Yet the pesticides we use
harm them by degrees
and blood sucking parasites
drain them as they please.
Man will not survive
unless the world decrees
that we must do all we can
to save the humble bees
Big Sal
Wed 24th Oct 2018 13:58
When I first read this, my mind read "humble bumble bees" for some reason. .
The topic is top notch (definitely worth writing about if nothing more than to raise awareness of a few folk that matter and can make a difference), the rhythm and rhyme leave nothing to chance, and the way the playful beginning weaves with the serious ending has a way of imitating bathos without fully engaging in it.
I think you have a winner here, Ian. Enjoyable read to be sure.